07/28 – WeWriWa

8 Sentences from: Choices

Thank you for stopping by. A brief blurb about the story: A traitor hides within a group of women and children Ranger Thaenad rescues from the clutches of enemy forces. He must decide if he is willing to pay the greatest price to ensure the safety of those he came to help. The snippet this week immediately follows last week’s post. Hope you enjoy.

choices3The smoke, billowing further down the hill, told of the tragic end for many other Kalieri. Twinges of guilt assaulted him for rejoicing in Gwenneth’s survival. Again he wondered how the Halurdow sustained their hate, and why they thought burning living Kalieri would diminish the Twin Gods’ power?

Frequent enemy patrols had slowed his progress for the past two candle-marks. The journey would be for naught if he led the Dark God’s followers to those he sought to help. A horseshoe struck stone nearby, followed by the sound of muffled voices. Thaenad shifted further beneath the dense thicket of koblisk bushes, ignoring the pricks of sharp thorns. He quieted his breathing when the sounds of mounted men moved nearer.


(WeWriWa) is a group of writers who agree to post 8 sentences of either a published work or an unpublished work on their blog on Sunday. Those who have signed up (and anyone else) has the pleasure of traveling (virtually) to samples of different authors’ stories, novels etc. Great fun!




26 thoughts on “07/28 – WeWriWa

  1. I’m holding my breath with him…I don’t want them to get caught!!!! Nice eight!

  2. Yeah, this is a cool 8. Nice scene-setting and character development, all within 8 sentences! And now we are left wondering… what next? Very nice.

    • Deb
      Same as before – thank you for your kind words and for stopping by. I really appreciate your visit.

  3. Suspenseful, especially in entering into the MC’s thoughts. It’s quite a task, but it seems he’s up for it, so I’m anxious to read the next sequence! Great 8!

    • Susan,
      Thanks for stopping by. Glad you enjoyed. It does become a bit more of a challenge for him before the end 🙁

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