06/30 – WeWriWa

8 Sentences from: Battle of Stryker Pass

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Below, on the northern Kalieri end of the pass, sentries patrolled the perimeter of the valley, barring Clovis’ path to the Galdonan camp. He touched the Wolf Clan Pendant hanging from his neck. It flared with a blue spark. An answering flicker, pinpointing the person he sought, appeared near the center of the massed tents. A frustrated whoosh escaped his lungs. Could nothing be easy? He had to reach that spot and his uncle, Guardian Mage Glason Telmar. If he openly walked into the camp, they would demand he give his full name and purpose for being here, but the wolves had made it clear that the Twin Goddess wished his identity to remain secret from the army below, and he would follow her wishes.


(WeWriWa) is a group of writers who agree to post 8 sentences of either a published work or an unpublished work on their blog on Sunday. Those who have signed up (and anyone else) has the pleasure of traveling (virtually) to samples of different authors’ stories, novels etc. Great fun!



16 thoughts on “06/30 – WeWriWa

  1. So much information in this snippet, I like how you go through what’s important and give the intention of the character at the same time.

  2. Intriguing scene with the use of the blue flasher tool to locate the person he must rescue, right in the middle of an enemy camp… I love how you use his thoughts to create tension and suspense!

  3. I very much like the tone of this snippet and it raises many questions for me, which is good.I’d definitely keep reading. Love the hints of magic! Great excerpt!

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